Friday, November 21, 2025

Opening my mouth

 I feel my life has grown small since Rob's death. I have not published many words as I don't want to share my grief, my anger, my confusion. 

Marlene, dear friend, mentor invited me into her wild women writing circle. I wanted to join and yet I was frightened. Sometimes what comes out of my pen onto the page is too raw, too childlike, and I'm embarrassed. And I feel ridiculous that I am embarrassed. I have regressed and donned my solid coat of armour. 


The writing circle - women from around the world - excites me, inspires me, calms me. I am beginning to feel that I belong. Several weeks ago, the topic was poetry. I am not a poet. I chose the easiest form, the Elfchen or Elevensie. First line has one word, second has two, third thas three, fourth has four, and fifth has one. 


Mouth

Grows rusty

Fear robs voice

Leading a small life

Sob


Mouth

Rust forming

Frog croaking angrily

Is escape even possible

Hell


Mouth 

Sweet lips

Refusing to open

Fear has frozen words

Help


Frog

In throat

Refuses to leave

Mouth slowly forced open

Escape


Rust

Corrodes jaw

Jaw needs oil

Oil squirted between lips

Freedom


Mouth 

Grows rusty

Silent too long

Life becomes more difficult

Speak


I am not impressed by the above but when we split into pairs and I read, the other woman laughed and said you have to read these. "They're funny."  (I wasn't trying for humour but I was the first to read - otherwise I might have chickened out.  


Towards the end of the session, one sweet woman said that this is what she's here for - to hear other women's voices.